Playing Card Poems
Submitted by Larry Dean on October 23, 2008 - 5:55pm.
American poet and novelist, Richard Brautigan was the inspiration for this week's writing. We read his short poem, Poker Star, and discussed its meaning―the central image of the poem, as well as what may have inspired Brautigan to write it. Students were then given one playing card apiece face down. Once everyone had a card, they flipped them over, and brainstormed for five minutes to create a list of words based on numbers, colors, suits, and pictures on their cards. Once they had their lists, they worked the words into their poems, which did not have to make sense.
Here are some of the most imaginative poems. Great job, everyone! 
Mrs. Jones, 3rd Grade Untitled Kate B. I see flying hearts & long green beautiful grass. White long vines growing. An angel with white wings. A picture of a kid with wings. Many different kinds of birds. Untitled Monica L. Look! Look at this red nine of diamonds It's light as can be When you let it go watch it flutter quickly The unusual I and H sit there staring straight ahead not caring. Untitled Devon R. I have an 8 of diamonds it's a light red color. On the front it looks like an angel flying. It's beautiful. I go all-in. Diamonds Natalie Z. diamonds are sparkly shapes of floating squares sideways inside colorful flowers shading in the air with glitter sparkling around My Spade Jazmin Z. My card makes a W. if you turn it sideways it looks like fishes swimming; also they look like train tracks that are split in half. In the middle of the C it is a flower. My card is 7 when you flip it upside down it looks like an L Mr. Sandlass, 4th Grade A Diamond Michelle A. 4 diamond above as a shape of a square the reflection makes it red like lava the stars shining above like nothing before and that's all Cupid Jennifer H. A cupid fly, it hits the sky in the old side country. Three white stars blasting into rise. The diamond drops, it falls to ground, four guys found the diamond, and soon became famous. Untitled Racquel K. The Jack reminds me of him sitting like a King writing a note with a feather wing writing to his love with hearts in front of his face thinking about her in his mind he is thinking about how kind she is. And I can't stop thinking about her I can't blink and you know why 'cause I'm a card remember that. The Fish Andrew M. The arrow head is smooth that leaflike pointy thing all black disgusting that rectangular stick it caught a fish by a hook that fish is a prize winner a diamond it's worth you can see the heart of it zap! A stick in the heart the fish is dead it got put on the prize winner family tree Games of Constellation Angela Y. As we look up in the sky we see the constellation playing a game of tag. Animals of stars, things of stars run around bumping into each other and making crashing sounds. Soon they get exhausted so they get back to their spot and become the constellation again. Mrs. Goode, 5th Grade Texas Hold 'em Klea K. The man is holdin' a blue card. Can't see through it. 5 clovers on the table. He starts lookin' at it. Dealer dealin'. The man smiles. What cha lookin' at? dealer says. The 5 clovers. What about it? dealer asks. I see an X and V. On the card? Yeah Dealer says. Flip it ova. Fine dealer says. I can see a cupid. Oh yeah ridin' the bike? Dealer says yeah. I see da mermaids the man says. Yeah the dealer says. By da way who are you? the dealer asks. I am the card. Untitled Joseph M. While the wind blows the sails go back and forth. The trees blow while the leaves fall and the birds fly. While my heart beats. The happy angel hops a pogo stick. Untitled Muneeb Q. In the fall leaves are down I'm running my heart is pounding. The blue sky and the swirls a cloud shaped like number 6. An angel in the sky a mermaid in the sea. A plane without no wings cupid shooting arrows just waiting for fall to end. Untitled Toni S. Colorful pictures all around hearts and people lurking around. Line patterns following me I see sun shaped and the number 5. I see Chinese characters in a box. Two triangles and X that marks the spot. The sand clock shows time as the mermaids swim. A Card Yara S. I see a heart I see an A it reminds me of an apple because it's red. It looks like a V upside down it looks like lips and flame it looks like an I there are people it's blue there are birds it reminds me of the sky it looks real the people have wings
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