Lesson Note: This week, we learned what personification was and experimented with writing about it! We then wrote about nature, some with personification, and some with imagery, which we also read about.
Mrs. Childs, 5th Grade
A Really Hot Day (in a flower’s point of view)
by Wendy T.
It’s a hot summer day
with nothing to do. We had
not had one drop of water
for three days now
We don’t know what to do
besides thinking when
are we going to have water
for me and rose
Nature
by Derrick T.
Nature it’s so fun
it makes you want to run
Is nature fun?
or am I a real nun
and it’s fun to run
to become a nun
sing a song
that says ding dong
and an animal that says
hing hong.
Mr. Goldner, 5th Grade
Nature
by Rahma
I saw the most beautiful thing
I saw a tree falling
its leaves and the rain descended on me
and I played with the leaves of the tree and the rain
I said to the rain
the raindrops fell on the leaves of the tree
they said okay
they said the leaves thank you
and it was the best day for me
and for the first time I write poetry it can be bad
The Sun
by Daniel Y.
Hello I’m right on top of you
actually I’m on top of everyone!
That’s right you can find me
anywhere any time.
What’s my name?
It is the sun.
I give warmth and life and I
started everything or should I say stared at
everything (hahaha).
