Teleport to the Beach! Dreams @ Moos Elementary

This week in 3rd grade poems: Dream Worlds! The students and I discussed the playfulness of dreams, and how we could use the comparisons, sounds and other skills we had already worked on to make them come alive. Enjoy!

Ms. Freedman
3rd Grade

The Day I Wake Up
Jaquon W.

One day, I woke up. I felt weird
and I teleported to my house!
I had dash and teleport powers.
I teleported to the beach. I
jumped on the water… and I
stood on it! I tried again.


Winter All Day

On one night when it was snowing
I work up I saw that it had snowed
I woke up my family and I told
them that it was snowing so we
rand down the stairs and my dad
made hot cocoa and whip cream and three
marshmallows and it was hot so I poured
it and then I rank it.


Going to the North Pole

I hear something on my roof and I wakeup
and I hear footsteps on my roof
so I put my soes on and my coat on
and my mittens on and I go outside
and I see an elf and he decorated my
house and I said what are you doing
here and he said “hop on Edward,” and I
said how do you know my name and he
said “because when you were born
your mom us, santa and I,
we wrote your name on a list
so we were halfway there and I saw
a house it had elf so I said to santa
I want a drone and jordan shoes.

Ms. Golanty
3rd Grade

In The Fun World
Ashley J.

I woke up and
I was in a candy world!
It had my best candy
ever! And my house
is made out of cookies
I drank milk and it
was warm and it is
fun and I yelled Yes!
It was so fun
I cried tears of cookies
and it was the best
world ever, I love


Minecraft Land
Ethan Z.

I was walking home then
I saw a portal I
walked into it soon
the world was minecraft
I walked home soon
I was freaked out even
everyone was freaked out
the next day school was
cancelled but everyone
got used to it.


In A Mansion
Alicia H.

Once upon a time I was in a
mansion. And I was so
happy. There was a McDonald’s
room. There was a nice bathroom
and a nice kitchen.
It was a big house but I love
it. It had a zoo to “wow.”
And the backyard. Then
when I woke up I thought that
I was still there.

Ms. Brown
3rd Grade

My Dreams In The World
Angel L.

I dream I was in paradise
I dream I was in magical plays and I win
I close my alls I heard was music
I dream I was a celebrity


Elijah O.

I had a dream that I
was in Paris, I had a dream that I
had magical powers


Me Become MLB
Lukas F.

Since I was a little kid until now
my dream is still going to happen
because it comes true almost every
day now at 8-1/2 years old
my papi still tells me you
are going to be an MLB player
when you get older and
he says if you get
good grades you will
be a MLB player and
I have a catcher’s gear and
glove and bat and other gloves.



“Writing poetry makes me feel like I can see myself, like I can see my reflection, but not in a mirror, in the world. I write and I know I can be reflected.”
-Oscar S.

“Writing poetry makes me feel free.”
-Buenda D.

“Writing poetry is like your best friend.”
-Jessica M.