Hello again, readers! It’s hard to believe, but we are near the end of our time together at Kozminski. Last week was a relaxed one. We spent our time together editing past poems, polishing them until we were happy with them. Editing isn’t an easy practice, but it takes poems from good to great. Here are some poems that got a little extra love from their writers:
4th Grade
Sun & Moon
Aiden F. & Morgan B.
Moon drops are the gravity of space
Sun drops are like the yellow sunflowers
Moon drops are moody as a storm
Moon drops are always mad as a bull
Moon drops like to eat space food.
Moon drops like to use anything that’s
BLACK
Sundrops are always in a good mood like a
Rainbow
The sun is always nice as a pool
Sundrops love to eat the yellow cheesecake.
Sundrops like to use anything that’s YELLOW
Moondrops can be mean but sundrops are as nice as a flower
Universe Poem
by Jahylen B.
In the universe of my brain
a lot of thoughts are running and skipping
and they wouldn’t notice if a pipe was leaking.
The thoughts are floating like rockets
and also they forget money in their pockets.
Stars are laughing and Mars is gagging
because he saw the moon eating a salad.
5th Grade
Starfire
Janelle H.
Me & StarFire are both sweet
We don’t need anyone to help us
We are independent
She’s the pink to my purple
We love animals
And we both are like fire
Chicago In Two Words
Cassius F.
Fun beach
Fun playground
Crispy chicken
Chill breeze
Good book
Sharp mind
Annoying cousins
Loud class
Good grades
