This week at Edwards, we learned about writing concisely. We read a poem about seasons that only used two or three words per line and we used that as a model for our own poem about seasons. Lots of students prefer summer, can you blame them?
Ms. Ortiz
4th Grade
Summer
Sofia D.
Running with mom.
Red, white flowers.
The yellow sun.
Lions are hungry.
Winter
Ingrit E.
Winter is cold.
Snowflakes fall.
Snowmen freeze.
We open presents.
I love winter.
Fall
Giovana E.
Falling leaves
Warm sweaters
birds are leaving
pools are gone
wind is stronger
flowers are closing
shopping for cars
leaves are red, orange
soft fuzzy blanket
visiting family remembers
ready for Thanksgiving?
Summer
Martin G.
No school
no homework
no sleeping
play soccer
play XBox1
seeing
tulips rise
the sky clears
ladybugs crawl
and the sun sings
Summer
Jose M.
Schools gone
swimming pool
red, white flowers
running with dad
alligators in Florida
Winter
Big hill sleading
seeing Santa
seeing red
getting presents
build a snowman
Summer
Tomas N.
Running with Papi
Museum is interesting
Park is green
Zoo has animals
speaking of kings
Winter, Summer
Viviana R.
Winter
My Birthday
presents for me
Christmas is here
present trees
Snow day too
Spring
Flowers blooming
birds sing
tulips rise
green grass
nice weather
Summer
Summer here
places to go
things to see
zoo, beach
sand castles too
Fall
Leaves falling
turning colors
orange, brown
flowers close
grow back now
Summer
Angel S.
School is gone
swimming pool
Red, white flowers
running with Dad
going to Six Flags
going to Wisconsin Dells
Yellow sun
alligators in Florida
running on grass
Climbing the tree
tulips rising
blue flowers
Mrs. Campos
4th Grade
Summer
Hector E.
I love summer
because no school
sleep all day
play games
family plants again
Winter
snowman
snowball fight
snow fort
Spring
ride by bike
play outside
and waterpark
The Summer
Xavier G.
Yellow sun blazes.
Tree leaves shaking.
Speedy water slides.
Pool is cool.
Stars shine.
Fun vacations.
Faces of laughter.
Places of fun.
The summer.
Seasons
Fabian G.
The park’s hot,
the bike green.
Play soccer.
Go skating.
Jump at SkyZone.
The white park.
The brown leaves.
The cold water.
The flowers grow.
The blue pool.
Red leaves.
Yellow leaves.
I play.
White snow.
Leaves grow.
Fun to play.
Snow falls.
Play in snow.
Run in snow.
Run in grass.
Sleep.
Summer! and more seasons
JohnPaul G.
Summer is cool
and has
no school
Spring
is when the
birds sing
so they can bring summer
Winter
I love dinners
Summer
Eliana H.
Play at pool
I sleep
I swing
I play in snow
it is cold
it freezes
roses are red
violets are blue
God made me
perfect
leaves fall green
Seasons
Precious L.
Beach fun, you.
Rain’s not you.
Cold, you leave.
Play with you.
Mrs. Neri
4th Grade
Summer, Fall, Winter and Spring
Henry A.
I go swim.
I go to pool.
Sun is hot.
Fall
The leaves fall
yellow leaves fall.
Blue leaves fall.
Winter
The snow’s everywhere.
Teens had snow.
Snow is everywhere.
Spring
Sky is blue.
Sun is hot.
Sun is yellow.
Seasons Go By
Andres F.
Winter
Snowball fight
snow angel
snowflakes
jackets on
snow shuffle
Santa Claus
Fall
Thanksgiving
Halloween
Summer
Kids go YMCA
kids play outside
Spring
Humming birds come
Flowers become alive
Winter
Emily M.
Play in snow
The snow’s white
Go ice skating
Building snowmen
Sky’s light grey
Spring is fun
sun is yellow
watch raindrops
running in grass
chanclas off
4 Seasons
Nallely R.
Summer
The sun’s out
Let’s have fun
playing outside
in the pool
I have fun
Fall
Fall is nice
play with leaves
outside, I go
on the swings
Spring
I play
I have fun
let’s play
outside
yay, I’m happy
Winter
No winter
no pool
no playing
I hate winter
Ms. Guillen
4th Grade
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Ricardo J.
Kids run.
Yellow jackets.
Quiet streets.
Ladybugs crawl.
Ms. Andrade
4th Grade
Summer
Thamires R.
The yellow sun.
The cool pool.
The sun rises.
Water gun fights.
Wearing fresh clothes.
