Comparison Poems- Metaphors @ Edwards Elementary

This week at Edwards, we continued our lesson on comparisons. Last time, we talked about similes and this time we talked about metaphors! We chose to write about ourselves or someone else through a series of metaphors. 

Ms. Ortiz
4th Grade

Comparison Poem 
Martin M.

I am Grandpa Joe.
I am Flash.
I am Batman.
I am The Joker.
I am a race car.
I am Iron Man.


Comparison Poem 
Jazmine D.

I am a gorilla.
I am Albert Einstein.
I am a race car.
I am lightning.
I am a flash.


Comparison Poem 
Luis R.

I am The Packers.
I am Roders, # 12.
I am green.
I am a bird.
I am a winner.


Mrs. Campos
4th Grade

Comparison Poem
Tiffany L.

I am a bird.
I am a bear.
I am an apple.
I am an ink bottle.
I am a scientist.
I am a basketball.


Comparison Poem 
Julian R. 

My cousin is a clown.
My dog is a bunny.
My brothers are Siri.


Comparison Poem
Alex H. 

I am my mom.
My dog is a chicken.
My brother is a baby.
My family is a rock band.


Mrs. Neri
4th Grade

Comparison Poem
Belinda R.

Ella es un gorila.
Ella es una tormenta.
Ella es un jaguar.


Comparison Poem 
Lucia C. 

My mom is a farmer.
My mom is a book.
My mom is a boulder.
My mom is a dress.


Comparison Poem 
Daniel E. 

I am a snail.
I am a book.
I am a shadow.
I am Spongebob.
I am a storm.
I am a bell.


Ms. Guillen
4th Grade

Comparison Poem 
Josue M. 

I am The Flash.
I am a paleontologist.
I am a rhinoceros.
I am a piece of steak.
I am a lump of limestone.
I am a triceratops.


Comparison Poem
Jezlene G.

Mi mama es una flor.
Mi mama es un sol.
Mi mama es Dios.
Mi mama es la luz que me alumbra.
Mi mama es una mariposa bonita.
I mama es una reina.
I mama es un cupcake.


Comparison Poem
Liliana C. 

I am a hamster.
I am a car.
I am a hammer.
I am a koala.
I am a horse.
I am a monkey.
I am a shield.
I am a cat.


Ms. Andrade
4th Grade

Comparison Poem 
Tonatiuh S. 

Luigi es un papel.
Luigi is un canguro.
I am the Road Runner.
Yoretzy es Kirby.
Yo soy una hormiga.
Yo soy un león.



Comparison Poem 
Marjorie M.

Yo soy un payasito.
Yo soy un diamante.
Yo soy un chita.
Yo soy un arcoiris.
Yo soy una freza.
Yo soy una luz.
Yo soy un agila.
Yo soy el oseano en calma.
Yo soy un arbol con frutos frescos.
Yo soy un osito.
Yo soy emojis.
Yo soy un libro.


Comparison Poem 
Roberto O.

I am a squirrel.
I am a jet.
I am a quiet storm.
I am a dog.
I am a leggo.
He is a fox.


Ms. Resendiz
4th Grade

Comparison Poem
Evelyn F.

Yo soy un gato.
Yo soy una mariposa.
Yo soy la tierre de Francia.
Yo soy una maestra.


Comparison Poem
Samantha G.

Yo soy una mariposa.
Yo soy una arcoiris.


Comparison Poem
Eileen N.

My sister is a rainbow.
My sister is a doll.
My sister is a friend.
My sister is a thin stick.



“Writing poetry makes me feel like I can see myself, like I can see my reflection, but not in a mirror, in the world. I write and I know I can be reflected.”
-Oscar S.

“Writing poetry makes me feel free.”
-Buenda D.

“Writing poetry is like your best friend.”
-Jessica M.