Swan of Bees : A Piano of Candy – Juxtaposition Poems @ Avondale Logandale

This week we had fun playing around with silly language! We discussed the idea that a poet can place two strange things side by side ( a swan of bees…a kiss of babies…an eraser of kittens) and we can still imagine what that would look like in our minds. We had fun brainstorming a list of silly juxtapositions together as a class before using our imaginations to write individual poems.

Each week there will be 3 poems from each class published to our Hands on Stanzas blog, and every student will have an opportunity to see their written work published on our blog in the weeks to come.

Scroll down to enjoy this week’s published poems!

 

 

Ms. Lozada
4th Grade

An Ocean of Breakfast
Maximiliano T.

I wish I had a rhino of chocolate.
I wish I had a dragon of lava.
I wish I had an ocean of breakfast.
I wish I had a cover of bunnies.
I wish I had a school of hot smores.

 

My Weird Wishes
Yamileth Z.

I wish I had a desk of chocolate and strawberries.
I wish I had a bedroom of aquariums.
I wish I had a door of roses.
I wish I had a floor of rainbows.
I wish I had a house of chocolate kisses.

 

I Would Like to Have
Akayla W.

I would like to have a bed of roses
I would like to have a tree of money
I would like to have a jeep of roses
I would like to have a house of roses
I would like to have a room of puppies

 

 

Ms. Miller
3rd Grade

 

Snow of Truth
Emely C.

I wish I had a folder of snowflake
I wish I had a book bag of Lune
I wish I had a book of spells
I wish I had a bow of snow
I wish I had a tree of puppies
I wish I had a cat of hats

 

A Pie Full of Buffalo
Zakaylee F.

I wish I had a pie full of buffalo
I wish I had a car full of dogs
I wish I had a desk full of flowers
I wish I had an eraser full of money
I wish I had a mug of slime
I wish I had a shirt of flowers
I wish I had a rain cloud of candy
I wish I had a school of babies
I wish I had a school of money
I wish I had a folder of dogs
I wish I had a soccer field of slime

 

A Computer of Stripes
Royce R.

I wish I had a computer of stripes.
I wish I had a bedroom of Roblox.
I wish I had a machine of Fortnight.
I wish I had a cat of sprinkle.
I wish I had a door of Spongebob.
I wish I had a shirt of cats.
I wish I had a basketball court of hearts.
I wish I had walls of tiny rabbits.
I wish I had a Lamborghini of gold.
I wish I had a floor of guava juice.
I wish I had a window of John Cena.
I wish I had a folder of donut.

 

Ms. Afzal
3rd Grade

 

A Kitty of Rainbow
Adamaris P.

I wish I had a kitty of rainbow.
I wish I had a pillow of rabbits.
I wish I had a boat of kittens.
I wish I had a tree of money.
I wish I had a school of lizards.
I wish I had a pocket of rainbow.
I wish I had an office of LOLs.
I wish I had a galaxy of babies.
I wish I had a milk of candies.
I wish I had a school of a world.
I wish I had a hat of kisses.
I wish I had a computer of snowflakes.
I wish I had a teacher of mom.

 

I Wish I Had…
Johann R.

I wish I had a world of Legos.
I wish I had a sweater full of feathers.
I wish I had an office of bunnies.
I would like to have a boat of Roblux toy.
I would like a tree of kitties.
I would like a phone of gold.
I would like a gold of kitties.
I would like a friend of fur.

 

A Piano of Candy
Michelle R.

I wish I had a cat of rainbows.
I wish I had a dog of monkey.
I wish I had a piano of candy.
I wish I had a little puppy of ice cream.
I wish I had a house of money.
I wish I had a book of the color orange.

 

Ms. Pease
3rd Grade

 

A Pocket of…
Leah F.

[I wish I had…]
A pocket of sunshine.
A pocket of toys.
A pocket of bows.
A pocket of candy.
A pocket of puppies.
A pocket of space.
A pocket of ice cream.
A pocket of books.
A pocket of slime.
A pocket of food.
A pocket of cat ears.
A pocket of money.
A pocket of dreams.
A pocket of plushies.

 

A Tree of Slime
Jaliyah D.

I wish I had a bag of slime.
I would like to have a bag of money.
I wish I had a tree of slime.
I would to have a bag of puppies.
I wish I had a bag of unicorns.
I would like to have a desk of slime.

 

I Want…
Silana N.

I want a pocket of water.
I want a bag of cars.
I want a sea of love.
I want a toy of the sun.
I want all of the stars.
I want a pocket of pizza.
I want a rainbow of ice cream.
I want a bag of cars.
I want a bag of TVs.
I want a town of slime.
I want a bag of jojo bows.
I want all of the food.
I want a world of books.
I want a world of cats.

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