Week 5 at Dever was catching one group of students up about Rhyme and another group moved into learning about stanza. Ms. Sherfiniski’s class spent time telling stories through the use of a stanza and the group did incredibly.
The Picnic
Ella G.
Water crashing against the shore
viewing the birds rocking in the water
the view of Lake Michigan is just a breath taking view.
I touch tree that I climbed hiding
so Gabby won’t find me
I run all the way down to where the waves crash against the shore
where Gabby found me
We ate pretzels, strawberry’s and more
We laughed so much all I hear was laughter
I smelled a big giant rose
Jack my Dog
Diego N.
I see dog lifting its leg
liquid coming out
I hear my sibling freaks out
I smell pee
I touch bleach
I taste nothing
I just woke up
am hungry
Dirty sheets need to be washed
my dad is pissed
walk the dog
still has to pee
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Jonathan P.
ONE
I see him throwing the ball at me with his arm going back so he can get ready to launch the ball really far.
TWO
I feel the shape of the ball when I catch it.
I also feels the texture of the ball.
THREE
I hear his laughing because he is having fun playing football, I also hear me laughing because I am having fun.
