Rhythmic Poems – Avondale Logandale 5th Grade – Winter 2020

Students learned about rhythm in poetry and to apply this to their work. Students practiced writing to a 4 beat rhythm and to work within a 4 line stanza.


Ms. Pannel 

5th Grade

8:45 AM

 

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Jailene M.

 

Look up, look up in the sky

heaven, heaven is so high.

Angels are so very nice,

angels are cooking rice.

 

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Janlexis R. 

 

Hello, hello where are you,

I am hungry I need food,

If I do then give me a clue,

I’m in a school like I’m new,

In the tower, I’ll see the view,

from far away I’ll miss you too.

 

Ms. Pannel 

5th Grade

10:00 AM

 

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Abri V.

 

The thunderstorm is

thunder in the sky

like little rocks

falling from the sky

 

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Oscar F, 

 

Spider spider spiderman

he is a spider that is a man

so its time to save some spiders

from slender man.

Ms. Pannel 

5th Grade

10:00 AM

 

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Michelle D.

 

I love pizza in the sky

I eat pizza every time

My phone was not charged then it died

I have ice cubes down my pants

I sleep late last night

I miss Kobe all the time

Please take care of Gigi

I play basketball every time

Yo estoy con los angeles todos los dia

Y tengo mi familia a mi lado.

 

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Allison Z.

 

I play soccer in the space

and then I get hit in the face

then I went to the pizza place

then I solved a wonderful case

and I went to get my money from Chase.

 

 

 

 

 

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