Week 4 at Dever was a week to focus on Rhyme. Students wrote pieces about what freedom means to them and used rhyme as their featured poetic device. We learned about rhyme as corresponding sounds.
Carteno’s Class
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Aramis V.
Freedom doesn’t make me frown
Freedom makes me feel like I’m wearing a crown
Freedom is amazing its like a treat
It’s so really sweet
Freedom makes me feel like a star
Feels like I’m going really far
It doesn’t make me trip
No it doesn’t make me flip
Sports give me good vibes
So crazy it shakes my insides
Freedom doesn’t make me red
It makes me feel good in my head
No it doesn’t make me frown
No it doesn’t bring me down
Freedom really pays
So many things to do in so many ways
Video games makes me escape reality
thats how video games make me be
freedom fills my heard
if it had a taste it would take good like a pop-tart
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Janessa R.
I feel free while driving to town
Sun rays in my face
Im starting to frown
driving to town
Freedom looks like
Driving in my car
It’s pretty bizarre
I now have a scar
A drive in my car
Freedom feels like
Running the bases
“Safe”
Don’t know what the case is
Running the bases
When I am free I am…
Bike riding with my friends
eating pizza
gonna set new trends
bike riding with my friends
