Internal Rhyme

This week, students continued experimenting with internal rhyme.

Mr. Alzola 

third grade

Rhyming

By Oscar J.

I went to Taco Bell and they sell

well and after my food fell and I

found a nail and I tell her is this

yours and said yes

 

Someone Playing in the Park

By Fadul

I was in the park I

slide in the lid to my mom

then I was wide then

I was in the side

 

Mrs. O’Claire

third grade

About School

By Ashanti G. 

At the

playground I

lay down and

when I see the

ground I pound the

ground and I

pretend I am in

downtown.

 

At the Playground

By Anai T-C.

At the playground

I feel in the

around and I

got stuck

at the playground I play

 

School day

By Adamari P.

At the playground

I lay down and

go to downtown

like Greyhound and

pound growing

drown

 

My Lucky Day!

By Jocelyn V.

I fell on

the ground and

broke my nail

how said I was

when I fell

and broke my

nail. I was

so so sad

then the mail

came I was

oh so happy

I had gotten

in my new

school oh how

happy I was

I forgotten how

I fell and

broke my nail

once I opened

the mail

 

Ms. Carolyn Sauer & Mrs. Yanez

School

By Daniel G.

School is cool to learn, sometimes

I get answers wrong and act like

a foot in recess. I like to play a

duel team against team. We

pretend whoever wins gets

jewel and treasure also we get

tools to duel. It’s so dark outside

I could see the moon.

 

School

By Julian A.

School is cool

School is fool

School has tools

School has wool

School has stool

 

 

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