The Magic Bag

Greetings! Last week, Waters students dipped their toes into the world of imagery in poetry. We started by reading The Latin Deli: An Ars Poetica by Judith Ortiz Cofer and talked about the senses that the poem engaged for us. There were lots of things in the poem that we could taste and feel. Students were then given a random item from my magic bag and wrote poems based on what they got. Check out a few of them below: 

 

Ms. Roman's 6th Grade

Flowers Vivienne S.

Flowers

that smell fresh of pollen,

air freshener,

and so much more

 

Flowers

the wind whistles as they sway

as the rain drops ricochet from petal to petal

the petals falling as the flowers die

bye little flowers as we say goodbye

 

Flowers

all colors of the rainbow

and so much more

gradient

and vibrant

weather its one color or two

 

Flowers

so soft

and delicate

so dainty

as the petals fall

oh flowers so lovely and tall

A Treasure Zola B.

You can’t believe it when you find

it,

you run to your friend screaming “look”

You can’t decide whether to sell it, or

to store it with your treasures,

you aren’t entirely sure you know

what it is

 

All you know is

It smells like hard work,

It sounds like hammers hitting the edges of

rocks,

It feels rough and heavy,

It looks fragile, so you decide to be careful.

Then your friend tells you it’s what you

have been looking for,

A crystal

Holiday Tinsel Nora J.

Hung on rails,

sparkling,

shining,

stars in the

form of garlands.

 

Smells like Christmas cookies,

Infused with fresh smells

from the oven.

 

Tastes like plastic—

Trust me, I tried it.

Pretty good,

If you ask me.

 

As we decorate, it sounds

Like crinkly tissue

Paper, in a

way.

 

It kind of

Feels like fur,

If it were made of

Long strips of

silver plastic.

 

What do

you mean

you don’t know

What I’m talking about?

 

Silver holiday

tinsel, of course!

Ms. Smallwood's 6th Grade

Little Plastic Flower Calissa M.

Little plastic flower,

wanting to tell her story.

Everyone telling her she was

a fake little did they know,

they were ruining her fate.

 

All that negativity,

hurt her inside, little

did she know it was

coming outside. Little plastic

flower she was becoming, sick

with her little leaves browning

they gave her an ick.

 

Little plastic flower all

crunched up and old all

she needed was a little

positivity, and love to help her hold.

Doll Section Genna A.

One child asks her mom for a doll

She points to one doll

a girl with a fancy dress

As she lifts the doll the seams spread apart

creating the sound of rain on the window

her mother shakes her head softly

the girls tears remind me of the doll

It was an old doll

I could tell because some parts were so rough it hurt to touch

while some spots were soft as clouds

I believe this doll had a story

She had a small weapon in her hand

I imagined her being a fighter

As the mother and child walked out of the small store

I felt pain for the child

I wished I could give her the doll

but she had left. I knew that wasn’t right

Then another little girl walked in

and decided to buy the doll

it still made me sad

the mother bought her the doll

even though she didn’t enough enough money

that was the last time I saw the doll

and I’m glad

that at least one little girl

got to appreciate this doll

Simplicity; Normality; Abnormal Olivia M.

In a world of silence

Simplicity; Normality

Fitting in abnormally

Simplicity; normality

 

Fitting in awkwardly

Simplicity, normality

In a world made for pictures

Simplicity, Abnormal

 

In a fake world is normal normal?

Normality, Abnormal

What is real, what is not

Simplicity, Abnormal

 

Where are the fake fish going?

Swimming, Abnormal

Where did the people go

Abnormal