On My Block

Last week, Waters 6th graders continued their study of figurative language with metaphors. We learned that metaphors are a way to compare without using “like” or “as,” and we used Taylor Byas’ poem “South Side (V) as our guide. Students discussed the parts of the poem that they could taste, hear, and visualize. Then we got to write poems of our own about our neighborhoods. Check out a few poems below:

Ms. Smallwood's 6th Grade

Mt Neighborhood Annabelle

My neighborhood smells of plants and cars

but not too bad

My street is kids playing baseball

while cats hunt in alleys

The kids are roosters,

early in the morning

When I try and sleep

I just hear shouting

There is always kids outside

playing almost if they were

baby kittens in a house

My neighborhood reminds me of

playing in the summer

or fall, winter too

I like it here,

I think they do too.

My Neighborhood Felix

My neighborhood is the kids leaving the toy store

the teens playing in the alley

the birds singing

the can of diet coke exploding

the cat walking down the street

the rabbits hopping about

the noise of traffic

and the amazon guy backing into a space

the smell of barbeque wafts through the street

the sound of kids having fun at the park

the train on its way in

the construction work

and the school bell ringing

cars flying down the street

the sound of squirrels stealing vegetables

 

My Neighborhood James C.

Agatite, a street full of fun and joy

Everyone is social and energetic

The kids outside are wild tigers and lions

Hear them roar outside from the back of your house

 

Smell the dads making hot dogs and burgers on the grill

While the kids are ooutside

Running and playing

Having the time of their lives

 

See the kids dreading dinner

Wanting to stay and play with their friends forever

 

The kids beg their parents to go to Horner Park

Hoping to play on the playground

Thinking it is heaven

Ms. Roman's 6th Grade

My Neighborhood Sailor N.

My neighborhood

the people are sushi and ramen

My neighborhood

My street is Nano’s employees and people playing

in alleyways

My neighborhood

My neighborhood is

Aldi air and chlorine

My neighborhood

My memories are

doing cartwheels

in my

front yard

My neighborhood

Westlund Ari V.

My neighborhood smells of the random food

people make for dinner

It smells of grass

From that one person whose lawn is green

Even in late fall

 

The howls of the seal-dog are gone

And the cries from the child occur less

I assume they grew up, both the child and the dog

 

Everyone in my neighborhood has a face

I can’t remember the names though

 

Sometimes, people who I swaer I’ve never seen before

will come into the apartment building

I can remember some people though

Not their names though

I’m bad at remembering names

Leavitt Sadie L

Step outside, smell the graduating teens

People like ninja lines and bikes circling the

block

My streets are rhymes that keep their secrets

I remember kickball in the yards and

wiffleball in the Jewel parking lot

 

Happiness in the air, every step down Leavitt

There goes Cucumber looking for food

 

Kids coming out of school

The place of love and hope

Leavitt