Ms. Erzrumly 4th Grade
Having
fun and
going to
Disney
land
But the
dentist is
not fun instead
going to Disney
very happy to
see Woody and
Jessie and maybe
Slinky.
Passing Disney
confused and mad
why mom I asked?
She said she lied
while I just cried she said
where we’re going but I was
not cooperating.
soon to find out the
dentist said open wide.
Boom! The lights went out
I was as scared as an actor.
go check it out
the tv cranked like a firework
The wind blew!
the light turned on fast as a cheetah!
thud! it turned off again!
the snow went flying like superman.
shhh! The snow stopped
then the light came on as bright as the sun!
then we went downstairs
You check it out no you!
shh! I will check it out
Boom I heard
then I said nope. like the fastest talker alive
oh noo!
then I realized my brother was flickering
the switch. then as we were going up
boom, a sound.
family game night
everyone’s competitive
my brother’s fast like a cheetah
my mom also
I’m behind
My dad is in front of me
I am sad that I’m behind
it’s a race for first
Mom vs Brother
who will win
My mom beats my brother
by a hair
My mom’s not the best at the games we play
so I’m impressed and shocked
my mom won my brother was as angry as a
grizzly bear.
My sister said if there’s a ghost
make a sound
few seconds gone by, nothing.
I thought nothing was going to happen
until the Nintendo listened to us
it made a beeping sound.
The first day of camp
and I’m coming home
mom’s holding a carrier
she brought something home!
I asked her the first thing came to mind
“Did you get a cat?!” I asked
And when she said yes
I was so surprised
I jumped on her
like a happy cat!
I felt really happy
I had waited for years
and finally it happened
I now have a cat!
I was surprised when I made friends
It was my first day of 2nd grade
and I was alone but 3 kids
asked me if they want to be
my friends. I said sure I asked
their names they said Jay, Matthew,
and Nick. we were the best of friends!
My first time being
on a drop, Being brave
like if I was a lion.
Getting on the
ride being safe on
the ride going up
hundreds of feet.
Stopping on the top
waiting for the countdown
dropping like if I didn’t care
Going on the ride again
to be brave again. Stopping
on the top waiting for the
countdown. Dropping before
my eyes. leaving my soul
behind the ride.
Ms. Edward 4th Grade
I was swimming regularly in the pool
Later I did not know that I would be making
a fool
My family comes up to me and says “Come
on this fun slide”
I did not know it was my demise.
I agree and I walk up the stairs, 300 feet
I was singing a nice beat until I got to the
top, at least!
When I got on I regret, but we’ve already
gone, it seems quite wet.
I will not scream, I will not cry as I go down
the steep, steep slide.
I did scream, I did cry, but by then I
had finished by five.
I was happy, it was fun! But nobody else
wanted to try. Then I screamed then I
cried
“I want to go on that slide!”
I felt scared as a
stray cat, as I fell under the boards
panicked like a baby coming out of
a mother’s stomach
I tried and tried to get out but it
felt like it was sucking me in like a
big big void. suddenly my uncle
came in rescue and caught me
just in the nick of a clock and went
back to
snowboarding
Let’s go on the roller coaster
I could see it all away from my house
It’s so big as a giraffe.
The Line is so big as a elephant can be
I am the 40th person like if I was 40 years old
I am so excited like a puppy can be.
I thought my surprise
is small
but it was
actually big
I saw my mom
I was so excited as a puppy getting adopted.
a cold day
I’m cold as ice
my hands froze
I’m freezing like snow
I’m never warm inside or outside.
I sat in the car
waiting
and feeling bored.
Hours passed and I watched a movie.
eating snacks
Kinda sleepy.
Almost there
just talking to my dad
cause I’m feeling bored.
We’re here!
I was excited like a kid.
I thought it was small and boring
until I saw everything.
Yawning in the dark tired guy
zzzzz my dad is snoring
Wide awake and can’t fall asleep
When we are going to play something?
I thought I
was going
to
Target but
no my aunt
bought tickets to mexico
I was excited
as a confetti
going into my
head.
If you lie in an inconspicuous
suit on a tree
you can look like a camouflaged
iguana not in a tree!
If you are very tired then
you can be like as a turtle.