‘A mild whisper in a room full / Of preachers’: Metaphor Poems

Students read Langston Hughes’ poem “Dreams” before crafting their own metaphor poems.

Dreams

by Langston Hughes

Hold fast to dreams 
For if dreams die

Life is a broken-winged bird

That cannot fly.

Hold fast to dreams

For when dreams go
Life is a barren field
Frozen with snow.

 

“Poetry is a manifestation of the human urge to make sense of chaos, to find unity and symmetry in external reality.” -Medium, The Importance of Metaphor.

Ms. Wright, 7th Grade, Group One

Mixed Emotions by Autumn L.

Joy is a bright yellow sun that you see everyday.

Sometimes, you like to eat candy while you play,

And joy is awake when happiness is filled.

Although there will always be a day where,

Distressed is a cold thunderstorm, 

that you can see during April showers.

My house is a big beating drum,

While the rain is a small drumstick.

Then, anger is an erupting volcano, 

Because children can’t go out to play.

Happiness by Lexin H.

Not happiness is a grey sky.

Under the grey sky, 

I want a bowl of hot soup.

Soup comes out cold and dull,

No meat, no vegetables, no life.

Is it really necessary for soup to have all that?

No

 

The sun comes out,

Out goes the grey, cloudy sky.

Instead of a bowl of soup, 

Ice cream vendors are everywhere along the road.

I got a delicious chocolate ice cream.

Random Descriptions by Rita W.

Dread is a scratch 

You’re unable to itch.

It will nag you

No matter how much you

Try to ignore it.

 

Bitterness is a gullible person.

The more it trusts someone,

The more likely it can be fooled.

Each betrayal can build up 

A wall of hate soon to be felt.

 

Fascination is the sunlight.

When it shines down on something,

It makes it look more vibrant.

Once the vibrant thing captures someone’s eyes,

It becomes the center of their attention.

 

Joy is a flame 

In an isolated and empty area.

Even when everything around

Looks gloomy and sad,

It will continue to shine the brightest.

 

Boredom is an empty room.

There is nothing to be seen.

You can hear your own voice.

There is nothing you can do,

Except moving around and sitting.

 

Ms. Wright, 7th Grade, Group Two

Untitled by Ethan L.

Sadness is a dark rainy day,

That never stops.

Happiness is a gift,

That keeps on giving.

Disgust is a sewer,

With a foul smell.

Surprise is a confetti popper,

That explodes.

Greed is a bag of money,

And gold bars.

 

Dissatisfaction by Jason M.

 

Annoyance is a trip over a small rock.

Again and again,

Rain to a campfire.

Annoyance is to smother

A greasefire

With water.

It speaks out loud,

In a church service.

That mild feeling, of why!?

An annoying brother,

A stubbed toe.

A mild whisper in a room full 

Of preachers.

Even so, the campfire grows back

The grease fire grows stronger,

The church service finishes, 

The annoying brother silences,

And the pain of the stubbed toe,

Ceases. 

Sadness and Love by Kanara G.

Sadness is an autumn leaf losing color, 

A slow motion into coldness

An empty room that echoes

A sudden, heavy rain on a sunny day

But love is a warm blanket giving you comfort

Love is a key that unlocks you families heart