Wild About Words! Alliteration and Tone Poems
Submitted by Molly Backes on March 6, 2009 - 12:44pm.
From Cubism to Surrealism to Dada Tone Poems, we're getting weirder each week! This week we read Gertrude Stein's "Identity A Poem" and discussed her use of sound, alliteration, repetition, and rhythm to make a poem that makes little sense, but sounds amazing! The poets then brainstormed lists of alliterative words and used them to write their own wildly alliterative tone poems. Enjoy!
Ms. Koerner's Class
Strawberry by Jeremy W.
Berry berry I like strawberry. They're short like blueberry. Their vine is string. Straberry is a star. Strawberry is South Dakota. They sing when we are not looking.
Wacky by Hector B.
house is not a home. house is not handsome. house is a big hamburger. house is a hammer squishing a hot dog. hog is a heart. he himself is harmony.
I Don't Know by Dwaine
I am I because nobody really likes me. I want people more people to like me as who I am. People think I'm ugly.
Ms. Askounis's Class
The Crazy Letter E by Echfen S.
My brother said check your e-mail way I eat like an elephant. Everyone every- day ED is my friend and Echfen is my name. An example one of signed expression is one of mine. Equations are easy for a child like me. And I eliminate equivalent fractions from my mind.
The Day by Tatiana H.
Trumble table, Terrified times, and people like to talk a lot, Take the tape to the tower They have tons of body work people need Tens for the towel. They is terrific tattoos They had a great tennis team. The temperature had went up two days ago
Untitled by Grace R.
Chicago Chicago is a big city a lot of people just sit on the couch and eat cookies and chips and listen to Chris Brown. I like to sit on the computer I like to bake cakes
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