Upside-down Cliché Poems
Submitted by Molly Backes on January 23, 2009 - 9:53pm.
This week at McCutcheon we read William Shakespeare's poem "Sonnet 130" and talked about how Shakespeare takes a cliché and turns it on its head to surprise the reader into paying attention. The poets then chose common clichés and turned them upside-down to help us see things in new and surprising ways.
Ms. Koerner's Class
Mix Match by Tamia L.
Winter is not like a blanket; it's like a broken down car in the summer; When life gives you lemons you make lemonade; it really gives you a mess Home is not where the heart is; it's just where my mom is; The moon isn't a ball of cheese; it's a light that shines through my window every night. Friends are not like two peas in a pod; They're people you can talk to The sky isn't like a basket full of berries; it's like a pillow full of cotton. Love isn't a rainbow; it's a couple looking at the moonlight.
Friends by Marshawn R.
My friendship is like a light switch. Off. On. One minute we fight. The next we are playing together. We are not friends that always get along. We are really competitive with one another. I beat him. He beats me. Our friendship is the funniest. You first. No you first. Our friendship is the weirdest. You taste it. No you first. Our friendship is the best. GO Our friendship is the craziest. You jump. No you. But at the end we jump together.
Life (no cliché) by Hung P.
Life is not just feeling, but elements of fire, ice, lightning and more inside. Life is not to live, but with oranges and monkeys to live with. Life is not a box of chocolate, it is just something you have. Life is to sleep in the afternoon. Life is bungee jumping out in the middle of the ocean. Life is addicting to something odd. Life is like thinking you can fly. Life is like living in pudding. Life is like running in the water. Life is crazy as a cow.
Ms. Askounis's Class
Friendship by Sandra A.
Friendship is not the best thing in life, but it is the best thing when you are in need. She is not the best in the world She is ignorant and cold as ice. Shhhh don't tell her your secrets if she doesn't tell you hers She is not your friend if she is going to betray you. Watch out she is like a wolf she will Prey on you and tear these hearts into pieces.
Life, Is Tacos by Jeffrey D.
Life is not a dream it's a memory it's in you you're life. Life is not a bowl of soup it's like a man walking running jogging and stopping to your destination. Life is like an abundant house with nobody in the house except you. Life is having fun Life is being nice life is sometimes sad life could make you mad life is the reason we survive life is the way we walk the way we talk the way we run and the way we stop and dream about another life ahead of our own. Life is revolutionary. Life is cool. Life is you.
¿Friends = Forever? by Kiara N.
Friends are not forever. Friends come and go like rainy weather. Certain friends are sturdy tree stalks. Others blow like leaves on trees. Friends that are sturdy, are not there forever. They're there as long as they can be. Most of the time, that's not forever. Friends get into your business, loving to meddle. Friends start fights and arguments over little things. Friends like to say that they are forever, and other people are whatever. Is that really true? Other people are important, too. But they're not always there for you. Although friends aren't all you need, they're there to make things a little extra special.
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