Odes to Tigers, Books, Pizza, and more!
Submitted by Cassie Sparkman on October 8, 2009 - 5:54pm.
Today was our seventh class at Tarkington, and the student poets are getting into quite the writing groove. We looked at the traditional Ode today, reading an excerpt from Pablo Neruda's Ode to the Watermelon. We talked about how odes are usually poems of address, use lots of description and transformation, and are really a type of love poem. The Tarkington Tigers went wild, and wrote some funny, beautiful Odes. Enjoy!
Ms. Schaefer's ClassOde to Books by Olivia F. O beautiful books sitting around waiting to be picked up, Your pages flowing like waves moving from side to side. Oh, great mighty book, your cover is your shield, it protects you from the venomous reader. When I flip you, you do this little dance. To me, you sound like a motor about to run. You're like a hand-out, when I'm finished with you you go to another home. Ode to Tornadoes by Ronaldo B. Oh spinning around, you are the wind blowing in my face. A light gray line reaching up to the heavens. A giant chimp twisting in the flow of the wind. I love your strength for blowing things away and destroying everything in your path. Ode to the Tiger by Andreas H. O courageous tiger how your stripes follow you through the wet rainforest. O tiger, how I love the way you run, you stat off in a fast acceleration like lightening in a big loud BOOM! Your short hair flying in the air. O tiger, now going to find for your siblings, going to catch and kill an animal to eat. At the end of day, you go home and rest for the next day to do it all over again like a tiger going to the heavens, like an ordinary tiger should. Ms. Burgdorf's Class
The Willis Tower by Rosalba M. O beautiful Willis Tower you are so big and fat. You are like a toothpick about to go in someone's mouth. I love your little flashing lights on your little point. You are like a big spaceship about to go to space. O Willis Tower you are like the painting of my eye. Ode to the Sharks by Damarie M. O you are a killer from the killer gorge the Great Blue oh my friend a water world just for him family at home depending on him a fish that eats meat. Don't settle for tiny planktons but settle for fish. Wandering at the bottom of the sea. Watching for prey. A lovely creature but don't get too close. Move fast don't try to out-run it or out-swim it. O, killer shark. That Animal by Tequila B. O beautiful tiger, I love your long, sharp toes and long skinny/fat legs, a pair of arms and legs. Hop, hop, hop. I love your feet moving across the grass of the forest. The foot marks you leave behind of evidence. Daughter of Cheetah Granddaughter of Jaguar Cousin of Zebra. You are the remover good from bad end to end. You give me dreams of running animals. Mr. Dunlap's Class
Ode to Parakeet Green by Mikah C. Oh beautiful parakeet green how I love your adventurous color. You're the color of nature. You are the grass in my yard the leaves on trees Karina's folder on her desk the SPEAK! poster in the classroom the GO signal on the street my grip on my pencil. My Dog Rocky by Amir B. Oh beautiful Rocky, how you came out of your egg shell. How you sleep, laying on my bed like it's yours. Every time there is a knock on the door, I hear you bark and your ears remind me of the Rocky Mountains. How your mouth reminds me of a diving board line. I am diving in a pool of orange juice. Your eyes brown as my skin but you still see the color black and white. O dog, how I enjoy being next to you and how you enjoy being next to me. Your pal, Amir. Ode to the PSP by Nicholas C. You are a star in my sky. I love you so much I never hurt you. You are like the dog in my yard. You are the bike that I ride. You are the bed that I sleep in. You are the bowl that I eat out of. I got you when I was 6, and I will have you till I die and then I will pass you to my son and then to his son. Ms. Schneider's Class
Cold Stone by Amanda P. O beautiful snow I love the way you fall on the trees land on the cold grass. It's like a cold room. White as a piece of blank paper, as pretty as a teddy bear. O beautiful snow you are my shining star the way you love my eyes. I can't ignore you O beautiful snow! Loveable Pizza by Jonathan M. O beautiful pizza, I love your greasy top and your cheese too. How do you do it, to be so joyful and good as well as bad? Your topping pepperoni also is a good friend to you. You and it make a good couple. Without you, I would die. How did they create you, wonderful thing? When I bite into you, you make me feel warm and at home. But when I finish you I feel sad like I murdered you. Everything About Oranges by Daresha H. O oranges, so juicy and sweet, when I peel you you squirt juice in my eyes, you make me blind for a second. O oranges, you are so juicy and tender. You make me sad when you are gone. O oranges, you bounce like a basketball. O oranges, you kick like a soccer ball in the afternoon.
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