Human Being
Submitted by Larry Dean on November 12, 2009 - 3:09pm.
This week discussed personification—talking about something that isn't human but in human terms. We read Alberto Blanco's poem, The Parakeets and talked about the ways the birds were described in the poem.
Students were then asked to imagine they were something other than a human, either living or inanimate, and write a poem as if they were that thing.
Mrs. Goode, 5th Grade
Untitled Isabella K.
I'm a mouse a white mouse I look for things to eat at night
I smell something something weird something yellow but what is it?
I take little steps to it but when I get closer I get trapped but..... by what?
Oreo David L.
I fall asleep. The couch is warm. I turn upsidedown to dream. My owner knows when I dream.
So I dream then I feel a light massage on my stomach. Eyes close a mystery to who's petting me.
I sniff I smell one of my owners. Then I feel good behind my ears. We fall asleep. We dream.
The Ant Terry L.
One day I woke up the world is so colorful with a sweet green smell. I came up the wooden box it was night. I eat so sweet snow big not cold at all. I was red as fire, I like the cold blue drop from the sky. I live in a nice hole.
The Dog Dream Alex P.
The dog is swimming his eyes are closed and he is not in water is he dreaming or does he just want to go swimming? I know I just don't know how to say it in human.
Whale Eric W.
I'm a big lonely whale I try to make friends but everyone runs away. Just a big lonely whale at the bottom of the sea just waiting.
Mrs. Jones, 3rd Grade
Fish Christine H.
I'm a fish. I go swim in the water. I see worms. I am going to eat it. Then it is a line on. Do not get me and have me for a pet.
Butterflies Daniella M.
We fly all day with our colorful wings through the grass and the trees oh just can you feel the lightly breeze can you see the sun shining so bright oh butterflies they fly fly oh how we fly in the sky.
The Frog Marcus M.
I would like to be a frog..... "I can jump! "I can go lay on a lily pad! "I can go on water and land." Watch as I go into the swamp. The swamp is real eeky for me. "Yuk! Yuk!"
I Am a... Claudia S.
A shirt wandering in a store. I am a shirt wanting to go. I'm a shirt wanting to be worn. I'm a shirt that has buttons. I'm a shirt that got exchanged. I'm a shirt in a store wanting to go.
Ants Damaris V.
If I were an ant, I would see different things: an ant will see a rock but if I were an ant you will see a house. If you were an ant, you can see different things: outside different anywhere. You are lower if you are an ant. Big things. If you were an ant: huge outside, anywhere huge if you were an ant!
Mr. Sandlass, 4th Grade
Cow John B.
I live in a barn on a farm. I, cow, eat grass to make milk.
bug Vincente H.
I hate this life. I have to be on the constant lookout for the shoes. I wish I was big. Because I can talk but what good is that if you're small and have a tiny voice?
The Talking, Walking Television Andres P.
I went to the living room to see TV. Then I bent and the TV is alive, he said, are you gonna turn me on? I said, yes I'm gonna turn you on to see shows. Then he walked away. I drew a finish line with chalk, and it stopped. So I watched TV until lunch. He don't talk anymore.
Untitled Alvin P.
in my house the bird is trying to get in my window and the sun is so hot it looks like summer and the leaves are falling to the ground the world is crazy
Rabbits Natalie Z.
The movement of the rabbits goes up high and very low as if a person on a bumpy ride the way the rabbits hide between the grass laying in the shade and the misty clouds fade as if you wonder how the rabbits were made.
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